Please forward this error screen to ds1024. The introduction is often considered the most important part of your paper. Its main purpose is to sell your topic to the reader and grab their attention, making them want to read more.
Instead of starting with these sentences, just jump into the topic! The reader should understand what the paper will be addressing without you having to tell them. Your thesis statement should present the argument to be discussed. It should be specific and doesn’t necessarily need to be concise.
Examples of thesis statements are below. In Russia, Siberian Tigers do not have a safe habitat in which to live. Siberian Tigers should be protected because they are being killed at alarming rates. Due to the ever increasing amount of poachers in the eastern region of Russia, Siberian Tigers are facing extinction, and their habitat needs to be protected. The first example is a weak thesis statement.
Starting an introduction for an essay
Although it addresses the topic to be discussed, it doesn’t necessarily present an argument or draw the reader’s attention into the paper. The second example is better, but it is not specific enough.